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Frozen in winter
   i opened my heart
i hope i die
        alone
   no feeling
this is my sancturary, nevermore
     this is war

the cure for my mind and strength
   i sit and watch myself...deteriorate..

is this what its like to be dead?
        heart, soul..

         alone...

It is planned or is it my own suicide

TONIGHT?

lost


burn away, ashes are only left
   this is my final excuse
this is my sancturary, nevermore

this is war....
©2003-2009 ~Ingested-Truth
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..something i wrote tonight..

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:iconhybrid-acid:
War is a horrific, gruseum and cruel place. One would only wish to be dead, scarce of life.
Reminds me of a journal entry I had to do in Social about war. It's short but spot on the point.
:iconnicoleg2003:
Good poem

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YOu're welcome.

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:iconingested-truth:
you guys are soo nice to me....
:iconperfectdark4242:
"It is planned or it my own suicide" - This line doesn't make sense (to me at least :) ).
It's "deteriorate" not "deteriate".

This poem has an interesting structure, although I personally do not think that most of the line breaks/indents made any difference. It is still a good poem, however.

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:icontakniccals:
How can you pull these outta your ass?! I gotta know!

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We are never meant to be taken seriously and we expect to be taken very seriously on that subject.
:iconfillerinverse:
The war of death amongst yourself. Very interesting.
:iconingested-truth:
thanks for the typos!
and its
is it planned or is it my own suicide...

still dont make much sense hmmm?

i dont remember what the line was suppose to mean..forgot while i slept..ill try to remembe tho...
-ash

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