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True love, and broken hearts by ~Ingested-Truth:iconIngested-Truth:



The beauty behind the knife
The voice that told me, "sell yourself"
The containment of my words on her lips
The secrets written on my wrist
The pain in my side, pretending to be real
The tears in her eyes, lasting all night long
The heart beat keeping us alive
The wind in the hair, covering emotions
The rust on the swing, aching to be young again
The message, non-verbal, yet spoken out of ryhme
The sparkle in a puddle, making it all clear
The blankey hiding idle hands
The punishment for glancing touches, passive rushes
The love for a boy
The song of a girl
The freedom of speech
The backstabbing though of vengence
The wondering pathetic hopeless sap
The sickened looks, grotesque stares
The churled lip, and rolled up eyes
The story of true love , and broken hearts.
©2004-2009 ~Ingested-Truth
:iconingested-truth:

Author's Comments

...wrote this at 2 am...this morning..about..10 mins ago...

feltlike i owed you guys some poems so i decided to post it..

-enjoy...

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:iconrain-shadow:
i particularly like the line :

The rust on the swing, aching to be young again

this is a good feeling-evoking piece. interesting choice of parallel structure. your hands are anything but idle.

--
pook :raincloud: :blackrose: :painter: :pride: pook

[if you don't like a comment, don't take it personal.
i comment to be constructive as well as complimentary.]
:icondarknessupon:
sweet poem :) :hug:

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Please take this
And run far away
Far away from me.
I am Tainted
The two of us
Were never meant to be
All these Pieces
And promises and left behinds
If only I could see
In my
Nothing
You meant everything
Everything to me


NIN
:icontakniccals:
The beauty behind the knife
The voice that told me, "sell yourself"
The containment of my words on her lips
The secrets written on my wrist
The pain in my side, pretending to be real
-Clap-

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We are never meant to be taken seriously and we expect to be taken very seriously on that subject.
:iconmissmorbidminded:
OMG OMG OMG I LOOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS!!!! i would fave it but my computer is gay and it wont let me... omg ash this is beautifully written!!!

"The containment of my words on her lips
The secrets written on my wrist"

-most beautiful lines ive heard in a looooooooong time!!!

good job!!!!!!!!! :hug:

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My stock account: ~ MissMorbidStock
:iconkyonshi:
<3 +fav

--
O quam magna est benignitas Salvatoris,
qui omnia liberavit per incarnationem suam,
quam divinitas expiravit, sine vinkulo peccati.
Et sic indumenta ipsius a maximo dolore abstersa sunt.
:iconperfectisboring:
Wow...Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Great job, hon. :+fav:
:iconturbopat:
interesting...it flows great. i think you should rewrite another one but with a happy ending, honestly :D

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Don't question it...:faq:
:iconingested-truth:
i dont like happy endings......


*poke* you havent mailed me yet....
:iconturbopat:
but it would work so nicely with a happy ending...oh and i forgot about that whole mailing thing...what would i even say anyways, now that i think about it...

how's this...

hey...how's it going...good times....talk to you on da...

~Turbopat

p.s. chocolate makes everything better :D :thumbsup:

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Don't question it...:faq:

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