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crying blood, sweat and tears by ~Ingested-Truth:iconIngested-Truth:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open




Here i am
with two guns
                     to my head
which will go off
                            first?
the silver angel?
                               or the black death?
im sorry i couldnt keep
keep all my promises....
Is death forever?
or is it just a dream?
or even better
just a
memory?


GO AWAY!!


Am i glad to be here?
         i'd give an answer
            but im still crying
my
eyes out
i worked hard to be the hero
but now...
im lowered
to this...
impossibility

pulling a trigger
gritting my teeth
crying blood, swear and tears....
©2003-2009 ~Ingested-Truth
:iconingested-truth:

Author's Comments

my friend Karlene (taintedcrayon) drew the picture for me, just finished it today...

so i wrote a poem for it....
let me know what you think

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:icondarknessupon:
~darknessupon Dec 7, 2003, 1:05:32 PM
:judge: I like!!! ^^; :w00t!: very emotional too..:petting: :licking:

--
Please take this
And run far away
Far away from me.
I am Tainted
The two of us
Were never meant to be
All these Pieces
And promises and left behinds
If only I could see
In my
Nothing
You meant everything
Everything to me

NIN
:icontakniccals:
~takniccals Dec 7, 2003, 2:28:21 PM
-Sushi bar clap-

--
We are never meant to be taken seriously and we expect to be taken very seriously on that subject.
:icontaintedcrayon:
~taintedcrayon Dec 7, 2003, 4:44:47 PM
wee! The poemz awsome!! *hugz* I like it, I like it, I like it! :lick:
:icondesertfirebird:
~desertfirebird Dec 7, 2003, 7:58:47 PM
HEY! a picture that finally goes with the poem :rofl:

--
　 ／l、
（ﾟ､ ｡ ７
　l、ﾞ ~ヽ - :heart:
　じしf_, )ノ
:iconfillerinverse:
~FillerInverse Dec 7, 2003, 7:59:42 PM
The picture won't come up because DA is being retarded again. Nice poem even though it's quite sad. Sorry, guess you just don't have what it takes to be a hero.
:iconingested-truth:
~Ingested-Truth Dec 7, 2003, 8:11:33 PM
clik the full view...its should come up then

DA is doing only fillveiws for some reason
:icondragonmaster2:
~dragonmaster2 Dec 8, 2003, 2:39:39 PM
Your picture is so awesome, I want to print it but this printer doesn't have a disc for it now. The poem's pretty good but shouldn't the last line be seperated at the comma, a i'm just a beginer at this what do I know. I'm anxious to see what u come up with next.
:iconingested-truth:
~Ingested-Truth Dec 8, 2003, 2:42:45 PM
nope it doesnt need a comme
like if you say
i went with him and her...you dont need one only need a comma if theres a third one...

youll learn it next year in English
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